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All I Can't Say
Contributed by
Lavone
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:32:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There's so much I can't say
When I look into your eyes.
I'm worried you'll reject me
And hurt my foolish pride.
Each day this love grows stronger
But I could never let you know.
There's so much behind my smile
That I could never show.
I'd hold you for a lifetime,
If you would let me in.
I'd love you like no other,
But you don't understand.
Everytime I see you
You are holding her.
The pain is like a knife
Cutting deep into my soul.
So I'll dream of us together,
Of just how it could be.
And all that you are,
Will reamin a silent part of me.
Copyright ©
Lavone
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2006-05-15 17:32:11]
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Re: All I Can't Say
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:40:11 PM AEST
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| A beautiful poem full of emotion, and a tale of unrequited love. Loved all of it . Thank you . Sue |
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Re: All I Can't Say
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:33:57 PM AEST
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| Nice poem, To often we let our fear of rejection stop us from reaching our ultimate goals. We all see it, but for some reason we allow ourselfs to be burden by a foolish pride. |
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Re: All I Can't Say
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by katt on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:58:47 AM AEST
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Heartfelt poem about the pain of love. Great emotion and good job.
katt |
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Re: All I Can't Say
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by Davinah on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 08:21:50 AM AEST
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Ah, unrequited love... painful...
Beautiful poem
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