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Ingredients of a Day
Contributed by
ed
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Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Nelson likes to say his name
Out loud, when no ones around.
Sometimes what he says makes him happy,
Sometimes what he says makes him sad,
other times he just repeats it,
It doesn't make him feel at all.
He tests himself with objectives,
Calls them the ingredients of the day.
They enable him to make an opinion,
For when he says his name.
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2003-02-06 00:20:00]
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Re: Ingredients of a Day
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by tease_whizz on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 09:53:15 AM AEST
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| hmm, not sure i quite get the meaning of this poem - but its well written and i feel like i relate to it on some level. your comment about not being mundane tasks is relevant to everyone at some point - things you've done a thousand times but just can't quite do today. anyway, great write, keep them coming. KT xxx |
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Re: Ingredients of a Day
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 12:00:59 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem I enjoyed reading it!!!!
mckayla |
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Re: Ingredients of a Day
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by ed on
Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 12:18:19 PM AEST
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Thanks very much. Had a read of yours and much enjoyed 'soul within sin'
Take Care
Ed x |
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Re: Ingredients of a Day
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 03:13:47 AM AEST
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| this is a nice way to show that in your opinion you are special good job |
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