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Learning curve part II
Contributed by
somnium
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:11:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Manipulate my deepest chills
And take this life my only will
This heart of rock and firm desire
Yet burns with oldest crimson fire
My eyes set deep inside your head
The only kick since you've been dead
Your soul to travel this limbo plain
My soul set free to shake this pain
Was it me who held the knife to you
Or loosed a bullet in deepest blue
And sweeped it into warmest red
And through this hell where you were lead
Yet I set free your fate to mock
And I gave you your final knock
Over the edge of consiousness
To purgatory, nothing less
I slit your wrists and took your life
Strangled you and used you knife
To take the heart from your beating chest
And feed to family and the rest
Of those who revelled in your fate
Because destiny called me into hate
Twas not my choice to take your life
The fates controlled my angry strife
The things you did were made to harm me
And your life could just alarm me
Over the edge into your grave
To death and life I was a slave
This story, for that's all it is,
Makes manys' blood to boil and fizz
Over their eyes and into my mind
My sanity I must now find
Copyright ©
somnium
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2006-05-15 15:11:45] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Learning curve part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kayden on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:43:31 PM AEST (User
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Wow... very well written poem... Very well worded... Incredible |
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Re: Learning curve part II
(User Rating: 1 ) by redwest802 on
Monday, 17th March 2008 @ 07:25:33 PM AEST (User
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good read nice flow i enjoyed it
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