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A Shattered Soul
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:55:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Good, you came.
Nice to see you.
Please, sit down, and hold hands.
We're going to talk to a ghost
A dead, shattered soul.
They want to share the pain
The living only pass the blame.
But the dead own up
For they get no second chances
Oh, guess what?
I'm dead.
Copyright ©
flamingblade
... [
2006-05-15 14:55:20]
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by ThePhoenix on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:12:31 PM AEST
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| I liked this. Wierd, but it made me smile. |
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:22:52 PM AEST
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| sounds kool, dont really get what your getting at, but hey this is your poem, and as long as it means somehting to yoou thats all that is important |
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 04:18:16 AM AEST
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I
Love
This.
Love the twist at the end
im probably gathering my own meaning and misinterpreting but i do love the feeling im getting from this
xo
emzyrah |
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