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Good-Bye
Contributed by
xstandingherex1
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:23:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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how can you look at me like that
and not show any sign of regret
do you not care anymore
if that's the case what am i standing here for
do you ever think back at the good times we shared
and how you told you'd always be there
now when i finally need you the most
you only come to me as a ghost
i can't believe i thought you were the one
and all you thought about was how to say we're done
as she looks at you with those big brown eyes
I can't help but want to tell her she's better off saying.....good-bye
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Re: Good-Bye
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by ever1der on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:31:54 PM AEST
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| lots of thoughts and feeling in this. |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by ---Alexis--- on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 05:06:57 PM AEST
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| Hey. I like ur poem, its deep and its pretty kool |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:20:36 PM AEST
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| not bad, nice topic to write about im sure alot of people can relate |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by Keisha on
Friday, 21st March 2008 @ 12:58:52 PM AEST
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I like this, very well written. also verry sad.
good job. |
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