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A Shattered Soul
Contributed by
flamingblade
on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sky is dark and cloudy
Numbness is taking over my body
FLASH!
Pain explodes in my face.
Liquid trickles down from my head.
FLASH!
Everything is dim
So.......
How do you feel about a seance?
Midnight. Tonight
Be there.
Or you may as well die.
Shhh.Hush little one, don't cry.
Nowe wave to your mommy,
Goodbye.
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flamingblade
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2006-05-15 11:30:00]
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:45:46 AM AEST
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Got my attention.... awaiting the next.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:06:47 PM AEST
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| Keep writing mate, You get at least one reader every poem you write =) |
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:08:09 PM AEST
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| Keep writing mate, let me rephrase my last post, You've now got at least one reader for evey poem you write =) |
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Re: A Shattered Soul
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by Sasha on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 12:27:10 AM AEST
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| wow, deep and intriguing, good work, Alex... |
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