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One last goodbye
Contributed by
gertiegosh
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 09:22:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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You took it all
Then watched me fall
Walk away from my bed
You walk away from me
Walk away from what you never want to see
One more nail
To consecrate my death
One more knock
And you’re my last breath
Goodbye
Goodbye
Before I say goodbye
You should know
I really did believe your lie
Goodbye
Goodbye
Before I say goodbye
You should know
I will fly
Without you
Further than you
I will fly
Goodbye
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gertiegosh
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2006-05-15 09:22:41]
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Re: One last goodbye
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:19:46 AM AEST
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| Good write. Sometimes it's very tough to say goodbye. I wish for thee love |
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Re: One last goodbye
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by flamingblade on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:35:57 AM AEST
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nicely done
you did a very good job with this write |
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Re: One last goodbye
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:49:22 PM AEST
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| Fair play, nice poem, stay optimistic as long as you can dont fall into a trap of depression. |
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