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Sometimes Turnips Cheat
Contributed by
rapnificent
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Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:48:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sometimes the deception begins way before the relationship does
It's as if someone wants you to like him because
You think that he's someone else entirely
Some people mislead and plot so confidently
Violating on a level that's too montrous to see over
Playing you like you were no older
Than that turnip that fell off the truck just yesterday
And you end up telling yourelf that you'd better pray
Once you figure out that it was all deception
And in the end, you're left only with contemplation
When there should be some type of shot to protect you from heartbreak
They've got innoculations for so many other things, for goodness sake
They say life's a stage, but in the end
At least you don't have to pretend
That you didn't enjoy the minute, yet good part
Of the play
Remember that enjoying yourself during a masquerade is an art
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Re: Sometimes Turnips Cheat
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by desireemiote on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:20:38 PM AEST
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I like the part about the shot for heart break.. if only... Hope you have found love and happiness to replace the deciet or that you do soon.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: Sometimes Turnips Cheat
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by Keilantra on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 02:54:28 PM AEST
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wow, i don;t nknow what it is about this poem but i really enjoyed, i think that its becuase it has this sublte scarcasm that was just right for it.
When there should be some type of shot to protect you from heartbreak
>That you didn't enjoy the minute, yet good part
Of the play
Remember that enjoying yourself during a masquerade is an art
Those are my favorite lines, or the ones that i thought had literal potence. Good job, and i hope to read more of you work.
xXx
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Re: Sometimes Turnips Cheat
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by ever1der on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 03:43:18 PM AEST
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| virtual.. not real; all these friendships can end in is hurt..they are built on deception. |
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Re: Sometimes Turnips Cheat
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by ek_da_poet on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 05:30:16 PM AEST
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i really like how you flowed, great job!!! have a different variety of poems you write, you'll become even better!!!
keep it up |
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Re: Sometimes Turnips Cheat
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 07:01:01 AM AEST
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The title totally threw me, I was expecting humour! this is a very deep and well penned piece.
You have a great talent.
J. |
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