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endless ramblings of the insane
Contributed by
guiltycircles
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:35:46 PM in AEST
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have you ever wondered if the sky will fall?
and if it does will it land on you?
will it hurt or will it save?
if you were stuck who would you call?
no ghosts in this town
just empty beings
like the rubbish from christmas holidays
this is the caravan park of the world
killing me loudly, no hiding this pain
do you dream of warmer days?
when rain is too far away to scare?
endless ramblings of the insane
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2006-05-14 21:35:46]
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Re: endless ramblings of the insane
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by Lady_Daisy on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 11:25:26 PM AEST
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| Thought provoking. |
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Re: endless ramblings of the insane
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by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 06:44:39 AM AEST
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Hello lady...
i thought this was a depressing and an interesting read. and i love that kinda stuff ;)
i really like this line of course
endless ramblings of the insane
it is such a cool line and now i wish i came up with it.
KarlaMarie
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Re: endless ramblings of the insane
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by eeeitak on
Tuesday, 1st April 2008 @ 01:18:06 PM AEST
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| i love this! you're a very talented poet, i really like the line "no ghosts in this town". very well done :D ! |
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