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Sitting and Wondering
Contributed by
samwrue
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:27:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I’m sitting her,
All alone.
Thinking about you my dear.
Wondering why I’m alone.
I know the reason,
But I don’t want it to be true.
I think it is you.
You and everyone are nice to me.
It helps a little,
But I still can’t see.
I do a lot wrong,
And a little right.
I don’t want to be alone.
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samwrue
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2006-05-14 20:27:03]
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Re: Sitting and Wondering
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by Lady_Daisy on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 11:28:32 PM AEST
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| Novice I take it. This needs a bit of a touch up, some of it doesn't really make any sense. For example "I do a lot wrong". |
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Re: Sitting and Wondering
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:08:37 AM AEST
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This was good.. A little check over with some words but this was good. I liked it
take care
christina |
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