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My Crappy Car
Contributed by
yackerz85
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:06:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Work!!!
Please work.
I ‘m tired of
you piece of junk.
Your rust won’t come off.
And your paint is faded.
You won’t go over sixty.
You get 10 miles to the gallon.
Barely you pass the state inspection
But you are the only car that I have.
Copyright ©
yackerz85
... [
2006-05-14 20:06:14]
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Re: My Crappy Car
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by Avarice_Riot on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:50:39 PM AEST
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Heheh. I don't have a driver's license yet but I can imagine how frustrated you must have been. Poor car. I hope it's working better now. And thanks for putting a smile on my face so early in the day. :)
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Re: My Crappy Car
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by faiton on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:36:17 PM AEST
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| nice write, good format. |
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Re: My Crappy Car
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by samwrue on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:36:11 PM AEST
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| nice poem. sucks for the car though |
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Re: My Crappy Car
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by Drapes on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:37:38 PM AEST
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haha! we used to have a car just like that! (now its in the dump... lol) nice poem!
-Drapes |
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