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passion
Contributed by
anotherface
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 02:55:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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my friend today taught me a word
a word of which i had not heard
when my friend told me its worth
his words sang sweeter than a birds
my friend went on, but with a frown
he said this word has been worn down
now only traces can be found
no more glory; no throne, no crown
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2006-05-14 14:55:10]
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Re: passion
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by spider on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 04:24:32 PM AEST
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| really good :) but sad, as the best of them usually are. |
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Re: passion
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 06:19:49 PM AEST
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Very provacative peice of writting a lot of impact. Nicely done.
Ben |
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Re: passion
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by Heretic on
Wednesday, 7th June 2006 @ 08:55:12 AM AEST
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Some say a picture is worth 1000 words. I say those two verses are worth 1000 pictures. They contain so much depth and emotion. Really shed some light on things.
Thanks for the great read. |
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