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The Rose
Contributed by
Countrytennis
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Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:27:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A beautiful red rose stands alone
Each petal is flawless on its stem
And perfuming a scent all its own
Something so perfect can not die
It is an elegant gift from nature
But a rose survives only for a time
Sad that such a blossom will wilt away
One can count the blades as they drop
One, two, three perish on the overlay
For each leaf that falls, a heart is broken
The rose bears a powerful magic
A demeanor that is not easily forgiven
Love and beauty are its arrogance
Never doubt the potencies of a rose
It is the favor of everlasting romance
At last the final flake dies on the tray
The flowers beauty ended sorrowfully
As a teardrop washed it slowly away.
Copyright ©
Countrytennis
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2006-05-14 08:27:01]
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Re: The Rose
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by desireemiote on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 12:05:39 PM AEST
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I love how you give the rose such control.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: The Rose
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by Alison on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 06:40:26 PM AEST
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| very moving. deep and true. awesome write. |
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Re: The Rose
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by The_Young_Poet on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
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| true and very good. I like it. |
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Re: The Rose
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 07:26:29 AM AEST
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| Very, very lovely. I wish for thee love. |
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Re: The Rose
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by katt on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:39:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful. I could almost smell a rose while reading this. Very vivid. Great job.
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Re: The Rose
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 23rd May 2006 @ 09:21:52 PM AEST
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I love roses and you certinly describe the rose well...Very well written...
God Bless!
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Re: The Rose
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th May 2006 @ 05:06:52 PM AEST
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The rose is such a beautiful flower.
This is also a beautiful tribute written with passion and great insight.
J. |
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