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When the day comes...

Contributed by Kellros on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:24:50 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

Tomorrow haunted by ghosts,
a vision slowly choking throats,
nightmares killing the dreams,
far away echo screams.

Like pain memories not forgotten,
hopes slowly have rotten,
it's for better, telling himself,
thoughts drift as blank stares pierce a bookshelf.

Long nights laying in bed thinking,
lessons taught and a heart aching,
brute force left him with no choice,
whispers die slowly from voice.

Sleep kills silently all the pain,
each sunset pain drips like wine from grain,
a knife carved words never decaying,
chest burns as depression lays waiting.

It's too much, the time goes by too slowly,
months pass as he sits waiting lonely,
a choice represented delaying eventuality,
the day would come as the sun sets sadly...

The day came and nightmares arrived,
emptiness did beat in a caged heart deprived,
shadows whispered lost thoughts,
as confusion echo'ed a dream left in knots...

Copyright © Kellros ... [ 2006-05-14 08:24:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: When the day comes... (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:47:00 AM AEST
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wow...i really enjoyed this!

wiz

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