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How Bright the Darkness
Contributed by
katt
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:55:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Silent footfalls in the night
as an eerie stillness encompasses
while sleep overtakes the body and mind
struggling to climb from the void
when phantom shadows move in secret
free will flees to certain control
a skip in time and dimension
a hammering heart filled with fear
eyes wide open reflecting the sight
a choking scream escapes unheard
from the ears of those in heavy slumber
a switch is turned and the body obeys
the mind rebels and fights for victory
against the unknown uninvited guests
bent on accomplishing their mission
carried out without hesitation
memories erased and confusion ensues
when entering the twilight zone
how bright the darkness becomes
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katt
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2006-05-13 20:55:57]
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Re: How Bright the Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:19:15 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this magnificent peice of work!
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Re: How Bright the Darkness
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by wizard on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:25:53 PM AEST
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nicely done, katt...
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Re: How Bright the Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 11:39:34 AM AEST
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Thoughtful and insightful. Had an NDE, katt? Follow the Light. Fantastic, deep and knowing poem.
wabl
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Re: How Bright the Darkness
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:29:44 PM AEST
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My how I enjoyed this poem Katt.......you are so right the evil forces in this world, the demons are taking their toil! You have such talent with words, a true Word Wizard! Good for you, and let me Welcome you dear Katt
to the YPDC Crew!
We're so happy to have you aboard.......hope you stay for a long, long time!
Warm love
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Re: How Bright the Darkness
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by Lilly-Quill on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 05:32:47 AM AEST
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Wow, dynamically this is enthralling; but the title has an even greater impact, for sure~! Oddly enough, the majority of folk seem to ask that question, when what they should be asking is "how fast can I run."
Love this demonstrative muse, another thought provoking piece. Keep' em coming, this is great!
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