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It doesn't matter
Contributed by
kaitee
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 06:30:12 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Woke up today feeling kind-of blue.
Didn't really know what else to do.
Cry? Smile? Scream? Yell?
Wondering what has put me under this spell.
My heart aches, and I can't heal it.
I'm becoming immune. I can't seem to feel it.
Maybe it's a good thing, me being numb.
Or Maybe it's a bad thing, me being undone.
I don't know, so I'm reaching out.
I'm calling Your name to tell me what this is about.
For someone who is thought to be so strong...
How and when did I go so wrong?
That doesn't matter now. It's in the past.
The second I cried to You, You were there to last.
I need your healing touch to grasp my heart.
I need You to speak and make a lasting remark.
My broken soul I place in your hands.
With your help alone, again I can stand.
You are the only thing that's been true.
So now, I completely give my life to You.
Copyright ©
kaitee
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2006-05-13 18:30:12]
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Re: It doesn't matter
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by ibelieve-dreamsonhorizon on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 06:58:26 PM AEST
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i can see that you need support bad. just believe, belief will give all the hope you need. dont give up. think about all the heros saving lives in the dark. fight back
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Re: It doesn't matter
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by Alison on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:21:09 PM AEST
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| awesome write! |
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Re: It doesn't matter
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by katt on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:53:37 AM AEST
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Oh....this takes me back to my own pain and sickness. And I too cried out to the Lord. he seemed to be the only one listening. Not even the doctors would listen for a long time.
And my kids thought I was losing my mind.
Anyway, great poem and very touching. Enjoyed it.
katt |
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