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Fall On Me
Contributed by
Drapes
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 02:46:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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If you're lonely,
I'm right here.
If you need me,
I'm right here.
If you want me,
I'm right here.
So fall on me,
I'm right here.
Yell and scream,
I'm still around.
Lie, act tough,
I'm still around.
When times get rough,
I'm still around.
So fall on me,
I'm still around.
Laugh with her,
I'm being patient.
Hold her hand,
I'm being patient.
She breaks your heart,
I'm being patient.
So fall on me,
I've been patient.
You go on,
I'm still waiting.
Days the same,
I'm still waiting.
Waiting, waiting,
I'm still waiting.
So fall on me,
I'm still waiting.
Today tomorrow,
I'll be here.
Next week, next year,
I'll be here.
Until forever,
I'll be here.
So fall on me,
I'll always be here.
Copyright ©
Drapes
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Re: Fall On Me
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 02:53:09 PM AEST
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| That was a great poem. I feel the same for someone myself but I know I will be waiting for a long time because they will never come back. Keep up the great writing. |
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Re: Fall On Me
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by jay89 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:20:48 PM AEST
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| great poem. i really enjoyed reading it. you have a great taste in words. i know how you feel in this poem, before me and my fiance got togther it's how i felt. so great write. |
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Re: Fall On Me
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by yackerz85 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:22:35 PM AEST
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I really liked the style you used in writing this poem. It showed great emphasis on your point that your always there with your arms open. I hope the person your writing about realizes what a great person you are.
~Mark~ |
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Re: Fall On Me
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 03:59:14 PM AEST
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| sweet. |
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