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Waiting on You
Contributed by
samwrue
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:00:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting here waiting for someone.
Thinking it won’t happen,
But my friends said my girl will come.
I just waited and waited.
The more I waited, I hated.
I tried and was turned away.
But they kept on saying,
“You’ll have your day.”
Finally it happened.
I met someone.
She is beyond amazing,
And we should have fun.
At first she just wanted to be friends.
I was like, “Here it goes again.”
But I didn’t give up
Cause you aren’t suppose to.
It paid off for me.
Now I’m with the greatest girl, You.
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samwrue
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2006-05-13 11:00:15]
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Re: Waiting on You
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:44:50 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, samwrue! Nice intro with yer poem. You'll find folks here sharin' love of loved ones, and of life. Congratulations on not givin' up and findin' the "paid off" of doin' so. Very good write.
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Re: Waiting on You
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by suesmuse1 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:44:42 PM AEST
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| Just shows we should never give up on love! Be Happy! |
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