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Pity Party
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:59:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Keep up the walls
Keep up the lies
Keep living in sadness
With your happy disguise
Keep turning to liquor
Keep numbing the pain
Keep looking for the one
Who will break this chain
Keep blaming others
Keep hiding in shame
Keep the world thinking
You're not to blame
The sad truth being
The sad truth is just
You've not got me fooled
I feel only disgust
Copyright ©
PoeticHybrid
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2006-05-13 08:59:22]
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Re: Pity Party
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:07:25 AM AEST
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Arg! I hate when people do stuff like that. It's like "just get over yourself and stop wallowing"
Besides, nobody can you better than yourself.
Good write.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: Pity Party
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:09:57 AM AEST
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| *Nobody can help you better than yourself* |
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Re: Pity Party
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 11:58:48 AM AEST
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nicely done, its has a simpl flow and isnt too deep, you didnt lay it on too thick, i liked it, keep writing
xXx
~kei~ |
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Re: Pity Party
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by Shmokin on
Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 09:56:59 PM AEST
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| Nice write |
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Re: Pity Party
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 09:22:46 AM AEST
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Quick and to the point. Nice rhyming.
Peace, Laura |
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