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Before you Fade Away!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:44:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel your hand still touch my face
And all I wanted from you was to love me
For me to from you I must be free from
Your all I am any more
My pressure starts to rise within these closed in places
Feels like your sun of God just reached out and grabbed me
I never seen you smile in all your million faces
You haven't tears enough for what you done to me
Oh God Why
You know that I was hurt that day
If I could I'd take your pain away
You know I never meant to say
That I don't need you
God knows I need you
And time flies away
You fill my heart and leave again
I thought you were my friend!
And now you fade away
Your all I was before
And now you fade away
Your eyes I once adored
And now you fade away
Give me one last kiss before
Before you fade away!
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Re: Before you Fade Away!
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by desireemiote on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:51:30 AM AEST
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Unrequitted love can be the most painful thing. Worse is when you lose feelings for that person just as they begin to feel for you.
I love this poem. It shows how much you can love a person no matter what they have done to you. And also the desperation that can ensue right up to the very second that person leaves your life.
Megan(and her bun in the oven) |
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Re: Before you Fade Away!
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 09:19:53 AM AEST
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Human relationships can be so complex.
It is no good to try to understand them.
They carry a mystery within themselves.
And that is what they should be. Mysterious, but sacred, - it is often not up to us to unravel, why we love somebody deeply and believe in reciprocity, to find ourselves disillusioned. Happens to most of all.
It's tje acceptace of it that counts. There is a reason for all that happens.
Enjoyed this work very much.
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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