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Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:12:02 AM in AEST
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Lost
In worse ways than this
Feeling rejected
By Thee...
All in all
Ideals and morals
Inhuman
Inhumane
Your children are not perfect
Can't they see?
That is what
Will always
Make us unique
Or special
Our charms
Are in our flaws
And everyone
Seriously
Everyone
Deserves a second chance
Because nobody
That's right
Absolutely not one person
Gets it right
The first time
Copyright ©
desireemiote
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2006-05-13 07:12:02]
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Re: Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
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by Aquaelius on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:39:00 AM AEST
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I really liked your structure, a kind of building to the point. And are you ever so right. Except for me, I'm pretty perfect... not on paper, but in real life.
I liked it, short and to the point... thanks for sharing.
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Re: Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:23:02 AM AEST
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Excellent take on things. I applaud your words.
I feel them intensely and you are correct in saying
no one gets it right the first time. I hope you are
forgiven.
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Re: Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 08:57:50 AM AEST
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There are these words - I believe in Luke,- when the disciples asked Jesus how many times men have to forgive.
And His answer was "Seventy times Seven"
that is:
Ad Infinitum.
So let us take His advise to heart.
Nobody is unworthy of forgiveness.
Enjoyed.
Blessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 06:15:01 PM AEST
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Quite a nice style u have and a lovely peice of
essential writting 2 be sure. Nice presentation.
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Re: Uniquely Deserving Forgiveness
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by Lo2681 on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 11:16:23 PM AEST
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Very nice king of abstract. It's diferent. I like it:)
Lo |
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