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You hate it
Contributed by
Millennium
on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:40:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
obsession
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You hate the way I look at you,
You hate the way I dress.
You hate the way I’m a complete
And utter mess.
You hate it when I speak of you,
You hate it when I smile,
You hate it when I claim that life
Is no longer worth while.
You hate my favorite story-books,
You hate my porcelain doll,
You hate all my letters, all my notes,
And all my telephone calls.
I hate the way you look at me,
I hate the way you dress,
But, I love, oh I love, the way you’re a
Complete and utter mess.
Copyright ©
Millennium
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2006-05-12 23:40:31]
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Re: You hate it
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by Cupid on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:54:49 PM AEST
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I really like the rhyme in this, Millennium!
I think I know how this feels...
One just can't live up to everyone else's standards...
So I suppose we're allowed one naughty little indulgence, and that is to smile when you see the person that hates you struggle...
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: You hate it
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by emystar on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:07:06 AM AEST
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But, I love, oh I love, the way you’re a
Complete and utter mess.
Wow this is a very powerfull, beautifull etc.
Luv it.
huggs,
emy |
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