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Scarred
Contributed by
flamingblade
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:16:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Never be the same
Permanently rearranged
Can't undo my mistakes
Love is hard to give
Almost as hard as it is to find.
Hate is very easily classified as evil.
But after much thought
It is found to be the aftermath,
of love.
You love someone and they break your heart.
You grow to dislike them, and eventually,
hate them.
I'm permanently hated by my family.
Or rather all that's left.
I've been brainwashed
So now I believe this:
I'm worthless.
You'd have to be crazy to love me
Or even care.
Loveless I am doomed to be.
I hope everyone can see
I'm all alone, really I am.
Can't even imagine
Myself happy
I'm imperfect and not good enough.
So please,
Stop wasting your time.
You can't cure me.
I'm scarred for life.
And even Death can't save me.
I will never worth loving.
Just go home,
give up on me.
Say Goodbye.
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flamingblade
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2006-05-12 18:16:11]
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Re: Scarred
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 07:43:50 PM AEST
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it's sad...the way you've given up on yourself. makes for a lovely poem though
great write
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Re: Scarred
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by Lo2681 on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 01:07:42 AM AEST
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Wow ...deep poem. We are all worth something though in this life so dont think that you aren't. Keep your head up:)
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Re: Scarred
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 10:56:52 AM AEST
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U have no idea how much i can relate 2 this,
people may mean well though they rebuttle this writting as they do mine but i just let them. they don't know what u feel inside your not alone but u have the courage 2 share these feelings, does that mean i think your worthless? no in means i think your worth wihile but what i or any one else thinks is irelavent, thinking is one thing feeling is another. a most effective peice of writting.
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