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The Kiss
Contributed by
Alison
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:01:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Oh this love I have not known,
This feeling I have not felt,
This air I have not breathed.
The wind, the earth,
Soild, unchanging,
Depth of ground,
The clearest brown.
Rocks hard and firm,
Soft and tender,
The grip of life,
The touch of passion,
Contact,
Stars floating in the breeze,
Kiss so lightly, so heavy,
Feeling of peace caught in a storm,
Intense,
On the hand,
The cheek,
The lips,
Time lost its control,
Freedom, truth in one moment,
Captivating, deceiving in one moment,
This feeling such dream in reality,
This air to full in my lungs,
To whisper the words "I love"
To stop the flame in my heart,
To spine the world back to start,
I love, I love, I love,
You.
Copyright ©
Alison
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2006-05-12 16:01:54]
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Re: The Kiss
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by moses on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:36:11 PM AEST
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Great write alison. To be honest I was expecting some trite piece of love poetry when I opened this, but what a joy I recieved instead. It flowed well and was very sensual and touching. I love I love I loved it.
Keep up the good work,
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Re: The Kiss
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:21:39 PM AEST
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| Very well put. Isn't that a wonderful feeling. Beautiful hun. ~Lo |
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Re: The Kiss
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by wizard on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:30:28 PM AEST
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very nice...very romantic..i love it.
wiz |
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Re: The Kiss
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:17:14 PM AEST
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that's one passionate kiss! ..lol
(and great write)
B |
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Re: The Kiss
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by The_Young_Poet on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:58:10 PM AEST
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| I like it, very romantic and beautiful. Nice Piece. |
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Re: The Kiss
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by whiteleo1984 on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 01:43:35 PM AEST
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| very touching, brings out yur true feelings... very beautiful |
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Re: The Kiss
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by Skitzo-da-clown on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 10:59:31 AM AEST
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Isn't that the truth.......How all the world seems to stop when you're sharing a kiss with your "one". I've been there.
Well put. Skitzo |
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