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Let Me Die
Contributed by
xforever_faking_a_smile3x
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:28:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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they see my wrists and shake their heads
no one cares i wish i was dead
i love to see the blood drip down
i smile when i want to frown
no one looks at me and can see
all this pain i lock inside of me
everyday is just one big lie
this is my time just let me die
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Re: Let Me Die
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by kaitee on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 02:41:30 PM AEST
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short, but completely heartbreaking. if this a poem about you, i pray that you will soon realize that there is always a better day. just don't give up or give in.
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Re: Let Me Die
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by Aquaelius on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 07:45:02 AM AEST
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Very grim and curt, but you did rhyme; gave a more Kevorkian euthanasia... Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Let Me Die
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by Lilbabe on
Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 04:53:16 PM AEST
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this poema brutally honest expression of emotion. i liked how the way people react towards this kind of feeling...
lexy
"tomorrow you must rise again, face your fears and accept life, death, and what lies beyond." |
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