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Between the Burried and Me
Contributed by
justinjohnoliver
on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:23:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Between the burried and me there's nowhere to draw the line
As I lay dying I'm escaping the the hate you have towards me
My children, my bride, death to my valentine
Betrayed with a kiss your love will be missed, no longer will you be mine
Stabbed in the back, six feet under, your ice cold ghost will flee
Between the burried and me there's nowhere to draw the line
You're about to feel a rush of blood running down your spine
The guilt growing tighter like a noose, it's too late to say you're sorry
My children, my bride, death to my valentine
You start to choke on your mistakes and suffer for your crime
Your mind becomes your own prison, death being the only key
Between the burried and me there's nowhere to draw the line
The pendulum of life ticks away, marking the end of your time
The venom running through your veins to you becomes deadly
My children, my bride, death to my valentine
Such a beautiful wake up call, revenge so sweet and divine
I leave you lying face down, dying in a pool of misery
Between the burried and me there's nowhere to draw the line
My children, my bride, death to my valentine
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2006-05-12 12:23:12]
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Re: Between the Burried and Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:50:05 PM AEST
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creepy...but in a good, well-written kind of way. imagery is FANTASTIC! i love it...
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Re: Between the Burried and Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 07:32:44 PM AEST
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Justin~
A real thought provoking piece of poetry you have here. The imagery, flow and rhyme are fabulous. A very dark, but well penned write. Keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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