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Learning curve
Contributed by
somnium
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 11:58:47 AM in AEST
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Manipulate my deepest chills
And take this life my only will
Copyright ©
somnium
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2006-05-12 11:58:47]
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Re: Learning curve
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:48:49 PM AEST
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wow...two lines. EXTREMELY short. i think you could've written more...but in those two lines...you say so much!
wonderful write
- Bethani - |
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Re: Learning curve
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 04:22:03 AM AEST
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| short and mysterious, Good job! |
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Re: Learning curve
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by Val-Hundra on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 12:18:43 PM AEST
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Not so much a poem, I think, but a couplet that seems like it should fit into a larger work.
Not bad for what it is... but it is a tad weak without any real verse to give it substance. |
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