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Perfection in the sun
Contributed by
UrbanFlower
on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:29:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Through scented drapes,
and periwinkle skies
A new light glows.
Shielding peaceful mornings
From the permeating nausea of winter.
With tolerance and relentless simplicity
Frustration ceases.
Until only the clearest white of the sun remains.
Now, and only now,
In the perfection of the earths timing
Can the true meaning of life be grasped.
Until the heat of the day
And the darkness of a graffiti torn night
Break through to show
The prevailing monotony that is,
Unfailingly,
And without question,
Tomorrow.
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UrbanFlower
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2006-05-12 09:29:34]
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Re: Perfection in the sun
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:33:53 AM AEST
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This is beautifully written and flows smoothly. Very nice olfactory and visual imagery.
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Re: Perfection in the sun
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:39:12 AM AEST
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This was written well.. Great poem. I liked it
Take care
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