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Candle Lit
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:59:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I Cross the line of here and now, my soul it enters there.
And journeys far through time and space, another day to share.
A lonely candle without a flame, its heart is waxed and cold.
Life is cruel and unfulfilled, no one the candle hold.
Along the way someone appears, and lights a tiny flame.
The winds of time the flame to snuff, and no one there to blame.
Then there comes a candle bright its flame it sends new light.
The darkness flees and life is new, and chases away the night.
Two candles now shine brightly there, reflecting fourth their love.
A prayer is sent and thanking God in heaven up above.
Two candles make their pledge of love, their place now in the sun.
The candles burn together now, two flames become as one.
The candles now have burned so bright, the years now in the past.
Their warmth and love still brightly shine, forever will it last.
And when all time has ceased to be, and day has turned to night.
Two candles with their love and warmth, still shining there so bright.
Copyright ©
Gentlemanpoet
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Re: Candle Lit
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:38:10 AM AEST
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Very well written. I like the candle/flame images. Good write.
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Re: Candle Lit
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:44:15 AM AEST
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Butch took the words right out of my mind. I really enjoyed how the lighted candle was used as a powerful imagery for love, warmth and unification. Excellent work. May the candles flame burn forever.
wabl
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Re: Candle Lit
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:46:08 AM AEST
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Great poem. This was well written and i loved the candle light imagery.. Great...
Take care
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Re: Candle Lit
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by shelby on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 12:21:15 AM AEST
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romantic and inspiring your flow was wonderful.
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Re: Candle Lit
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by k2kdesigner on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 10:39:35 PM AEST
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| awww. how sweet very well put |
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Re: Candle Lit
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 06:22:59 AM AEST
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Excellent piece. Beautifully written..
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Re: Candle Lit
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by kiss4roq on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:14:59 PM AEST
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| I've fallen in love with your poem. It's such a beautifully written piece. Keep up the good work. I look forward to further reading your work. |
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Re: Candle Lit
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 12:34:20 PM AEST
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| very beautiful.. couplets.. easy to read.. I like how you the foundation of the poem went higher and higher.. very inspirational piece to me.. RL |
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