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Denying Heart
Contributed by
wizard
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:46:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The intention of a heart
So denying
The addiction of a kiss
Always calling
A tulip fragile love
Always wilting
Feeding on a broken soul
Ever daunting
A gentle touch enchants
So transforming
So much pain to heal…
Needs reforming
Empty pages - with no feeling
Tauntingly stare
Though for ages written;
Nothing's there
Staring charcoal eyes
Forever burning
Scorching words so burn
Pain returning
Copyright ©
wizard
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:55:07 AM AEST
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An excellent use of powerful words in effective structure to reason the denying of love. Really good work!
wabl
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:37:11 PM AEST
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| Beautifully put into words. I love how abstract it is. Nice work:) ~Lo |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by ThePhoenix on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:33:51 PM AEST
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| Yes we can all relate , the pain from within is evident.. Very powerful. |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 08:16:13 PM AEST
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great work again bro..
much said within a few short verses.. powerful-
last stanza's best..
"Staring charcoal eyes
Forever burning
Scorching words so burn
Pain returning"
B |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:41:44 PM AEST
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Incredibly potent, these words. I understand this intimately.
[honest, I do]
Hearts are funny things . . . and love, well, don't even
get me started. It is increasingly difficult to pinpoint
just what moves us. Or, conversely, stops that movement.
What we have to learn . . . is patience, understanding
and contentment in just the enjoyment of things for what
they are. It need not be that complicated. (though, I know
we are, none of us, bullet proof)
Brilliant write. I loved it completely.
~Breezy |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Lo2681 on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 09:49:10 PM AEST
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Beautiful. I love the way u are so discriptive. It really got to me.
~Lo |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 08:21:59 PM AEST
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Pure magic!! I love this...
Jenni |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 06:48:21 AM AEST
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Paul~
An outstanding and brilliantly penned poem. The sadness and pain from deep within is clear to us through ur words. You have an amazing gift Paul. A real natural talent in writing. You write from the heart. Those writes make the best poetry.
Staring charcoal eyes
Forever burning
Scorching words so burn
Pain returning
Absolutely awesome writing. Well done Wiz!
*hugs galore*
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 22nd May 2006 @ 10:42:55 PM AEST
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My thoughts ... Deny the heart ... and in retaliation ... there is much for the heart to deny you. Listen to your heart once in a while, it has been given voice for a reason. While it may not whisper with, or in, a voice of reason ... one shouldn't wait untill it screams.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st June 2006 @ 10:08:31 PM AEST
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Empty pages - with no feeling, man that line is riveting, a most compelling poem to read like being walked through a garden with many varieties of pain. excellant writting.
Ben |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th June 2006 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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| You share all those places where we have feelings, share feelings, know feelings and shut out feelings as well as reach out for feelings from others and things. A very good write. When you feel it, speak it, show it, use it... let your heart speak out, do not worry if it hears no reply outside of it, just let it feel and keep it open, whether it renounces deep love, or pain, or hurt, keep it open, be truthful to your feelings, and let your heart and tongue speak only graceful words. hugs, RaquelLeah |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by MachineGunBarbie on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:13:32 PM AEST
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| this is awesome.. I love it!!! it has alot of feeling to it. I can relate. Keep writing!! |
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Re: Denying Heart
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by Keilantra on
Saturday, 8th July 2006 @ 10:15:23 AM AEST
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Wiz, i really ,ike that you can make a really simple poem like this, but with intensity. You're writing is nice to read becuase i feel the sincerity in your words. and i enjoy that a lot. good job.
xXx
~kei |
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