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Sad Composition
Contributed by
mild_tempest
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Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:16:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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My life is like a sad song,
Never to be played again.
Only composed of sad notes,
Placed where they don’t belong.
My life is a sad poem,
Only read once then tossed.
Never to be spoken of,
A tale of a person alone.
I’m a lost composition,
Of deep emotions.
A person who’s life is sad,
And there was no transition.
Whose clouds never pulled away,
As the rain played their song.
When rain took over my life,
My world slowly bled to gray.
I always waited for the light,
For years on end.
But whenever there’s a dim glow,
It seems to run away in fright.
My life is like a sad song,
But without a happy end.
With notes placed,
Where they just don’t belong.
It’s a story only told once,
Where the person dies in sadness.
A person which no amount of happiness,
On the scale could bring the sadness, balance.
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mild_tempest
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2006-05-12 00:16:44]
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Re: Sad Composition
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:38:19 AM AEST
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| The structure was great. I felt the pain in your heart as I read your words. ~Lo |
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Re: Sad Composition
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by wizard on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 09:00:58 AM AEST
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beautifully sad!
nice post.
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Re: Sad Composition
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by samwrue on
Sunday, 21st May 2006 @ 04:24:47 PM AEST
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| very good rhyming |
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