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Euphoria In The Rain
Contributed by
Sasha
on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:42:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Liquid mirth beckoned to her gypsy soul
Casting spells on her runaway thoughts
Its silver dance on her thrilled wet skin
Rained promises showered by forgotten gods
Euphoria reveled through the slithering drops
To caress, to whisper, to sing sensuous odes
Splashing her with wet water-secrets
As elation coursed through the lavish hour
The incessant beats quenched her rhythm
And danced her over to the salacious night
Moving her to the heady brink of satiety
Over the daring edge of a thirsty life
Walking the in the rain, knocking on chances
Drawing charms from ancient wells
Warm summer rain and little wood-fairies
Weaving magic into the threads of dusk.
Copyright ©
Sasha
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2006-05-11 23:42:48]
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Re: Euphoria In The Rain
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by Gentlemanpoet on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 08:20:32 AM AEST
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I really liked this, and the only thing I would suggest is maybe cutting to more plain words to convey, thanks for posting and I enjoyed reading.
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Re: Euphoria In The Rain
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by JarrodLuke on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:46:07 AM AEST
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this is very well written and i feel emersed by rain as i read it.
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Re: Euphoria In The Rain
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by ButchHoward on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:48:14 AM AEST
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Very nice poem with beautiful imagery and I like the alliteration in this line: "Splashing her with wet water-secrets."
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Re: Euphoria In The Rain
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by palebluesun on
Saturday, 13th May 2006 @ 06:37:26 PM AEST
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| I love the bold use of words.I hate the rain and now I envy this "gypsy soul". Funny that is raining out my door right now and I was curious how a poem about rain could be a HAPPY poem.Indeed it is.Very well written.Poems this good should be edited ,however. ;D |
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