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Silence
Contributed by
Millennium
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Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:21:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Silence, it haunts me, like your ghost, in the night
Oh that silence, wretched silence, I believe it's winning this fight
But if i scream up to the heavens there's a chance that i just might
Win this fight against that silence in the middle of the night.
Silence, it haunts me, like your eyes, in the day
Oh that silence, wretched silence, it just won't go away!
But if i scream up to the heavens there's a chance that i just may,
win this fight against that silence in the middle of the day.
Silence, it sings to me, like his voice, inside my head.
When i'm waking up, or maybe going back to bed.
But sure enough its there, all those dreadful sounds are dead,
thanks to the silence that sings to me like his voice inside my head.
the silence sings to me like his voice inside my head
Copyright ©
Millennium
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2006-05-11 22:21:52]
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Re: Silence
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:55:33 PM AEST
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amaderz i love your poewm keep it up xXx kei
liv yas |
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Re: Silence
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by Mild_Tempest on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 12:29:13 AM AEST
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| A classical poem. You don't see this kind of format, or language used these days. I like it, it makes a interesting flow. |
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Re: Silence
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 05:22:36 AM AEST
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| well written, well done |
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Re: Silence
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by pvd on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:10:44 AM AEST
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| Good use of rhyme scheme. Very Classical in form.Nice piece. |
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Re: Silence
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by Lo2681 on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:11:25 PM AEST
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Very well done:) I like it.
P.S. thanks for your comments:) ~Lo |
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Re: Silence
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by LlAnglGrl on
Saturday, 18th November 2006 @ 07:58:33 PM AEST
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| it is amazing how some of the best poetry comes from pain and heartache... I really liked you're poem. Keep it up :) |
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