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the innocence of youth
Contributed by
all_that_i_can_be
on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 09:56:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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watching the world
fall down around you
thoughts make no sense,
you cant remember what you knew
a smile thats not fake
but its nowhere near the truth
wisdom flickers in teary eyes
long gone, the innocence of youth
all hope is lost
the futures nothing but a doubt
dont know whats left to live for
cant tell what lifes about
praying for someone to take my hand
fix it all and make me whole
no such thing as a small part
but that's one immpossible role
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Re: the innocence of youth
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:51:27 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written:) But you know what they say. If you can regognize that you are worth more than what has happened to you, you have become whole again. ~Lo |
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Re: the innocence of youth
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by Sasha on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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this is so honest and so intriguing!!
'a smile thats not fake, but nowhere near the truth? '
wow, your lines define subtleties so well.. |
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Re: the innocence of youth
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by anotherface on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 04:25:47 AM AEST
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i feel i can relate to this alot.
"a smile thats not fake
but its nowhere near the truth" captures it, for me.
great poem |
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