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Life
Contributed by
Shorty_Ace
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Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:54:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can you help me solve this problem?
It is a problem I call life.
I don't know what to do.
Life hurts, life kills, life gives you hell.
Life makes you think you have love,
But then it tears your heart out.
Life is twisted like a devil,
Cruel like a prankster.
And worst of all
Life doesn't care about you or me.
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Shorty_Ace
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2006-05-11 10:54:13]
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Re: Life
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by kaitee on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:14:40 AM AEST
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break-ups are hard to deal with and this poem you wrote are the real and true emotions that you feel right after it happens. i'm sorry that it happend, but there is always someone better waiting for you. hope everything works out for the best.
very nice write--very true as well
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Re: Life
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by depressedsoul on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:30:49 AM AEST
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| hey that sounds like me but im over that ass you know i like someone else...lolol... hey nice write though. keep it up Shorty....lolol |
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