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For J.E.D
Contributed by
rmcondon
on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 04:36:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Sitting on the edge of space and time,
a cascade of colours fills my eyes,
tumbling down from sapphire skies,
as ev'ry ruby sunset-
and golden sunrise,
The clouds burst with a purcussion of thunder
(a beat of the drum proclaims nature's wonder)
and fire dancing flares through pools of light
a crescendo of life we succumb to its might
The rainBow's tranquility transcends me away,
from the hollow worries of each Earthly day,
stretching beyond to the depths of eternity,
we're bound together in longing unity.
Copyright ©
rmcondon
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2006-05-11 04:36:42]
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Re: For J.E.D
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 07:15:07 AM AEST
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this is great-
vivid, metaphoric and very poetic overall..
J.E.D. is very fortunate to have this dedicated to them..
Great work~
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Re: For J.E.D
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 05:06:29 PM AEST
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Very nice, lovely imagery,
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