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alone is what the mind makes us
Contributed by
loveistorment
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Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:37:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I walk a lonely path that no man should take. Though we must take it from time to time. Must we believe that we are alone, even while surrounded by those who are willing to help.Yet your mind, cant take it, it needs to be alone, and tricks you to think the same. The need to push your self beyond the limits of sanity to the brink of destruction consumes your every soul. To feel the need to push yourself, pushes everyone and everything away until you are truely alone, your heart pounds, your thoughts cloud, and your body achs for a good nights rest. Yet overtime it makes you stronger just like you wanted, but now your coverd in scars that wants to show only to you. cursed to bare the burden of carrying thes scars now lie on you and you.
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Re: alone is what the mind makes us
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 07:10:38 AM AEST
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interesting write-
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Re: alone is what the mind makes us
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by ZforZachariah on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 10:50:30 AM AEST
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| i feel your sorrow, hope you find more inspiration. |
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Re: alone is what the mind makes us
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:08:32 PM AEST
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| very interesting write, but i've been there. |
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Re: alone is what the mind makes us
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by beattie on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 06:16:56 PM AEST
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| wow, nice. |
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