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Lying Awake
Contributed by
EddieDean
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Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:39:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I lay awake in bed,
Unable to sleep.
Everytime I close my eyes,
I see your face,
Everytime I try to sleep,
I hear your voice.
Low I cannot sleep,
I would not change this,
Not for the world.
For this way I can still
Be with you.
You are gone,
But I still have memories of you.
I can still see your face,
Hear your voice,
Feel your touch,
Remember your warmth.
These memories and dreams
Are all I have of you,
For you are gone,
Out of my life.
I have had my share of women,
One night stands and empty promises.
But none compare to being with you,
For you are my one love,
The one I live for,
The one I die for.
Now I finally fall asleep,
Dreaming my dreams,
Wishing,
Waiting,
For the day,
When I can see you,
When I can be with you,
One more time.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
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2006-05-11 02:39:16]
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Re: Lying Awake
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:55:18 AM AEST
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Sad but beautifully written.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Lying Awake
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:37:45 AM AEST
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| Thats so sad but know the feeling, lovely poem xx |
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Re: Lying Awake
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 04:22:18 AM AEST
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I can truly relate to this; having recently written something similar myself. Actually, that's merely a coincidence as I would be able to relate to it any ol' way. :-) I really found this enjoyable. It is very nice. Yes it tis sad but still there has to be a glimmer of happiness writing of wonderful true love remembered. Very beautifully written.
Thanks,
Tim
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Re: Lying Awake
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 05:29:53 AM AEST
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Truly heartfelt poem.
I think every one of us has once been through this or something similar. I know I have!
Very beautiful... |
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Re: Lying Awake
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by PoeticHybrid on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 06:34:57 AM AEST
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| Great job. Threre really isn't much else to say... |
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