|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Trying but still Hurting
Contributed by
becca_au85
on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:34:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
I'm trying to get over you
I'm trying to move on
I'm trying to remember
That what you did was wrong.
I'm trying not to break down
When I look into Emma's eyes
I'm trying to be the strong one
But my heart still wants to cry.
I feel something for another man
But my head still longs for you
I suppose I just need to forget
the good times we've been through.
I know I really feel for him
And it's here I want to stay
But you keep flooding my memories
I wish you'd go away.
It hurts to see your face
It tears me up to hear you name
I feel this pain that cuts so deep
I wish you'd hurt the same.
I wish you'd feel my agony
Your heart would bloody cry
You took my soul and destroyed my heart
Yet you still can't tell me why.
Copyright ©
becca_au85
... [
2006-05-10 22:34:36]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Trying but still Hurting
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I feel your pain becca-
stay true to yourself..and above all, stay strong.
great write..
B |
|
|
Re: Trying but still Hurting
(User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 11:28:11 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Becca, your expression of hurt is greatly shown, but you must stay strong for Emma’s sake.
sadaddy |
|
|
Re: Trying but still Hurting
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 01:31:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad but certainly understandable and really well written.
Hang tuff, big huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: Trying but still Hurting
(User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 03:46:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Can feel how you feel, been through the same, brilliant poem xxx |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
