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I fell into nothingness
Contributed by
zforzachariah
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:59:17 PM in AEST
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joe is an average human being living unhappily in this world and is seeking longterm/irreversible brainwashing/enlightenment/foreever happiness. He spends his last 500 bucks and change for a plane ticket to an esoteric and obscure temple in the snow covered mountains on the farthest reaches of the world. He heared all who went there experienced instant enlightenment. He walked for a day and finally reaches the temple. He has no money left, and he wants instant enlightement. He wants everything to melt away and be in a state of eternal bliss. It was a huge temple, biggest building he's ever witnessed, it took him several hours to reach the middle of the building, and there was no one around. He fell strange. He then saw a huge flight of stairs before him, he instantly started to climb. He estimated it must have been a thousand flight of stairs when he reached the top. He was so exhausted and tired that he said to himself: i will get what i want even if i have to climb a million stories. He raised his head and there sits his mirror image staring at him, except it was a female. Omg, joe gasped, we look exactly alike, but you are a girl! She continues to look into his eyes. Tell me please, how do i reach eternal bliss? joe impatiently asked. The girl just stared at his eyes, time was warped, and flew by, suddenly he realized the answer. It was so simple an answer that he was shocked: think nothing. He kissed her on her lips, gave her a deep hug, and stepped off into nothingness.
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Re: I fell into nothingness
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:46:34 AM AEST
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Re: I fell into nothingness
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by MysticFireFairy on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:22:42 PM AEST
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Your poem is really good it isnt like other poems I have read. It is very unique. I really like the somewhat romance it made it work. You did a great job on it keep it up.
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