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Afraid
Contributed by
Millennium
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:41:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Yes I'm afraid, but not afraid to admit it
Yes I'm scared, but I dare tell the world
Yes I'll cry, but i don't care if you see
Yes I'm afraid, but not afraid to admit it.
I cry everyday but the world knows why
I'm ashamed of my past but the world knows my secerets
I've fallen but the world doesn't need to help me up
I cry everyday but the world knows why
I long for a true love, but you know that i haven't one
I'm desparate for a chance, but no chances come my way
There's no hope left here, but I'll tell you anyway
I long for a true love, but you know that I haven't one
Yes, I'm Afraid, but not Afraid to admit it.
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Millennium
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Re: Afraid
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by The_Young_Poet on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:09:24 PM AEST
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| I like it. Nice Piece |
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Re: Afraid
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 06:04:27 PM AEST
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Yes ist very courageous to admit it.your longings ad yur being afraid.
B are infinitely loved by God.
lessings
Elizabeth |
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Re: Afraid
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:34:09 PM AEST
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| Very nice write:) ~Lo |
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Re: Afraid
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 09:56:07 PM AEST
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a very nobel and brave poem-
not many people would admit fear.. though they ought to.
nice work..
B
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Re: Afraid
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by Spike on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 01:56:18 AM AEST
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Very sweet, honest and brave in its theme and I really like how you structured this poem. It speaks to my heart as well.
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Re: Afraid
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:36:12 AM AEST
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Touching. I know many of us have such feelings, but many of us prefer to look at them through filters, ascribing them to any of various outside influences or people, instead of recognizing that they lie close to the heart of all of us, simply because we live.
Keep writing.
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Re: Afraid
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by Keilantra on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:38:01 PM AEST
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| This literaALLY LEFT ME IN TEARS, I MEAN IT, xXx always ~kei |
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Re: Afraid
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by pvd on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 06:13:40 AM AEST
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| The only thing we have to fear is fear itself. |
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