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Perchance to Dance
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 02:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Will you take my hand and lead me,
To the spirit of the dance,
Take the coldness from my heart,
Reignite the flame perchance,
Awaken rythmn in my body,
And movement in my feet,
Transform the lonely wallflower,
To a rose that is so sweet,
Let the sweet sound of the music,
Make me once again so whole,
Bring out the gypsy in me,
Putting passion in my soul,
Will you dance with me the tango,
The dance made just for two,
Lead me through the movements,
I will gladly follow you,
Or will you hold me closely,
And glide me round the floor,
Fill my heart full of desire,
To dance again once more,
But this is only a dream,
Of the wallflower all alone,
Who at the turn of midnight,
By herself will go home,
Waiting by the doorway,
For a prince to come her way,
To lead her to the dancefloor,
And really make her day.
So if you see this lady,.
In the dancehall, perchance,
Bring out the rythmn in her,
Please Sir ask her to dance
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jerseysue
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2006-05-10 14:13:39]
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:01:57 PM AEST
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This is very sweet and touching. Nicely done!
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by katt on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:42:48 PM AEST
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oh yes the feelings and thoughts of the lonely wallflower. I remember it well. Very good write and read.
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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May I Have This Dance?, British buddy. Oh your providing important material for that poem I told ya I was gonna write. This poem is of the same caliber (or do Brits say calibre?) of gentleness as The White Lady. Can't wait fer TWL II.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by The_Young_Poet on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:33:34 PM AEST
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| awww its so sweet. i like it. Nice Piece. |
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by Lilly-Quill on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 08:10:03 PM AEST
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Oh may “special Lady,” I'd say you topped many a musical lyrics for this enchanting words which could so easily fit into classical lyrics. I can almost hear a dreamy Russian jukebox melody, similarly to a memorable Hollywood tune (with the movie Anastasia): "Once Upon A December."
This is a heart-felt, passionate, and deeply moving, to say the least. If only I had the time and money I’d dare say I could make this into a famous hit song. What a magical and enchanting gift you have.
Absolutely Enchanting, a masterful masterpiece!
~Lilly-Quill
Music such as: The Bard's Dance (search for) http://www.geocities.com/ladycharlotte.geo/ladymidi.html
Anastasia, Once Upon A December (>copy from page find edit and put into find, on page):
http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Set/4836/bso.htm |
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 09:04:59 PM AEST
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This is a very nice peace...hehe could be me too:) Thank you for sharing this.
~Lo |
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by Spike on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:07:49 AM AEST
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Yeah, sure. Why not (sorry, got distracted with the imagery). Niche poetry for lonely ladies, and very sweetly done.
Now, how about writing one for us lonely guys?
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Re: Perchance to Dance
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by ludders on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 02:50:03 PM AEST
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| oh my god how can you possibly say my peoms are good this poem is amazing just like in dreams please keep writing |
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