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Toy Soldier
Contributed by
ek_da_poet
on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:37:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Rewind that toy soldier
to march on forward
one hand holding a rifle
the opposite grasped
a memorable picture
my comrades have been together
since the beginning of training day
the hot wretched obstacle course
straight to the enemies front line
the buddies i have endured such pain
eating a feast with many portions
singing on top; of military jeeps
these days are surreal
stand tall, chin up
with the almost bold army cut
what life we have of this doing
when will the fighting end
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2006-05-10 10:37:31]
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Re: Toy Soldier
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by kaitee on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 01:35:19 PM AEST
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ok, so maybe this one is good, but that doesn't change anything...
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Re: Toy Soldier
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by katt on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:02:39 PM AEST
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Very good read and write. Enjoyed it. Great job.
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