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Troubled Soul
Contributed by
humphdj
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Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 10:17:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Silence, sweet and tunefully sung
Lies calm the troubled soul
And scents of autumns evening breath
When joined do so console
Rejuvenating pleasures pass
Reality revealed
And clears life’s pitted misted glass
And troubled soul concealed
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humphdj
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2002-07-27 10:17:02]
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by markymark on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 10:46:19 AM AEST
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| I loved this...says so much in so few lines...amazing...Mark ... |
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 12:55:24 PM AEST
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Hi Dave, this is so insightful....loved it..
Jenni |
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 28th July 2002 @ 06:51:07 AM AEST
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This is a special one....I think it's very beautiful.
Chrissie xx |
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by Firefly on
Monday, 29th July 2002 @ 05:25:27 AM AEST
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| I would vote you a ten if I could! I definitely give you the high five for this one! |
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by chatabox on
Tuesday, 30th July 2002 @ 01:37:11 AM AEST
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oh!.....words to relax the soul then brought back to reality......
Like lying in the a warm bath with scented water and candles.....then stepping out in a freezing cold hallway.
Beautiful poetry Dave.....once again. |
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Re: Troubled Soul
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:35:48 AM AEST
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this is very different from your other "cute" kind of poems...and i love it
it shows you can do both things
it says so much in only 8 lines |
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