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LoveSpeak
Contributed by
spike
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:08:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Message in a bottle,
letters in the sand
whispers on a Summer’s breeze,
gestures with the hand
Clouds of words across the skies,
a wish upon a star
longing looks across the room,
worship from afar
Pieces of the puzzle,
finally making sense
steps that were so awkward,
now form a lovers' dance
Shapes within a tea cup,
speak of things to come
till then with you I have no voice,
for love has struck me …
dumb.
Copyright ©
spike
... [
2006-05-10 05:08:08]
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 05:27:56 AM AEST
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*applauds*
A very well written and stated poem. I love reading love poems.
Thank you for a most enjoyable read.
Tim
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by ButchHoward on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 07:23:46 AM AEST
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Hey Spike, this is a great love poem! Every line is so well written! I enjoyed it immensely.
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 09:32:47 AM AEST
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So clean, so tight, so tender, so shy, so SUPERB. Hmmm. I think I remember using that word before. Tip o' the hat to ya, wordmaster! Please never be silent.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by ek_da_poet on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:35:52 PM AEST
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| short and sweet, i like what you did with the bottle picture 'clever' |
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by katt on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:45:22 PM AEST
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Enjoyed it. Very good write and read.
katt |
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:46:09 AM AEST
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I hereby dub you the rhymemeister!
This just tripped off the tongue...
even with my lisp!
(admittingly it's one of those alcohol induced ones)
Excellent as always.
J.
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:10:11 PM AEST
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Clever piece, S.
And such a sweet sentiment. You so seemingly
write with ease the most beautiful stanzas.
And I must agree with John's comments. They are bang
on, in my most humble opinion.
Wonderfully enjoyable write!!
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 15th May 2006 @ 12:47:46 PM AEST
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BRAVO! BRAVO! BRAVO! this poem is so wonderful................I'm truly
Never read another better!
Warm love
consue |
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:14:08 PM AEST
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Spike
This is a very sentimental and romantic poem. It's easy to picture the person in love - longing from afar - nicely constructed.
Merry |
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Re: LoveSpeak
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by inoc on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 08:56:05 AM AEST
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I loved this one Spike....it's my favorite one !
Good work here!
CHEERS coni |
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