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Hollow
Contributed by
Davinah
on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:24:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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You dress up in silence,
to cover up the naked truth
That there's nothing underneath the stain,
and there's no feeling left inside of you.
You never question anything, ever.
You just go along with all that you're told.
And I once thought you were special,
but you don't have a mind of your own.
You are so ugly in your weariness.
A poor dullard without a clue.
Blank eyes with an empty stare.
The whole world can look right through you...
Copyright ©
Davinah
... [
2006-05-10 04:24:13]
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Re: Hollow
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by Lo2681 on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 04:27:22 AM AEST
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This is a very deep piece. And it is very true. There are a lot of people who are very weak out there.
~Lo |
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Re: Hollow
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by sorrowsofabrokenheart on
Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 02:28:42 PM AEST
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| I really like this poem... It had a great flow and great wording!! |
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