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.:I Lost You:.
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 03:51:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You lost me,
He said with my pillow clenched over my head,
His voice a murmur on the phone,
His heart broken in tone as I lay in bed.
Is that all you have to say,
I ask him once again,
I hold my breath as he replies with,
I just don’t see us being friends.
He was my back bone,
But what was he anyway,
I didn’t know him all that well,
Can I believe all he has to say?
I should have never fallen for a friend,
He said he’d never leave,
And I took his word,
Why was I one to believe…why was I so naive.
I lost him,
The day that I turned my back again,
I guess if I put it that way,
I wasn’t much of a friend.
But none the less it stings,
When a day passes without a call,
He says he can’t have me in his life,
Because he thinks of me and that that is all.
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Lo2681
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Re: .:I Lost You:.
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th May 2006 @ 10:31:27 AM AEST
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Hard lessons learned when someone puts us in their past. "I wasn't much of a friend" is a retrospective to consider with your next friendship. I personally would never fall in love with anyone if they weren't a friend first, just makes sense. Very good "lesson" poem.
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Re: .:I Lost You:.
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by Spike on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 02:29:57 AM AEST
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An all too familiar pain. I liked the structure and meter, and the storybook narrative, even though the subject matter opened up a couple old wounds. You never really get over it. Sigh.
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Re: .:I Lost You:.
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by Lilly-Quill on
Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 12:49:43 AM AEST
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Oh so say, but mixed with such courage to share~ "what great sign-post" for another to be warned...
A heart-felt, intoxicating read!
Thank you for sharing...
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