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so deep of a thought!
Contributed by
mellymell
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Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 10:39:16 PM in AEST
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A girl holds a knife, so deep in thought will she do it, what will people say, are they going to judge her if she does what she is thinking? does she not kno that there is lots of people that love her and will die with out her? does she not realize that she is hurting people when her herself is hurting? why does she think these things? is it something her friends or family did? Why does she hurt so much? Cant I take away her pain? I guess it is to late. So we say good bye
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Re: so deep of a thought!
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 12:56:34 AM AEST
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thoughts and prayers to your friend~
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Re: so deep of a thought!
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by JarrodLuke on
Friday, 12th May 2006 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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this is a great peom. i can understand the poem very well. good work and thank you for the emotional honesty
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