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Unconstant sea so blue

Contributed by Rawjer on Wednesday, 5th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Try to hold him back
tried to give him limits
with a hidden growl
he seams rather timid

but for what they do not see
a maniac is he
they try to control
and now they dont know he sold his soul

feeling his way through
an unconstant sea so blue
they spit on him again
and now hes got an urge for retaliation
bring a plague upon the nations
all that left you with anticipation

Never had a chance to shine
never learned the consiquences of a good time
heavy on his mind frail feelings
the sickness inside is revealing
its wicked head
only to bring death to those who refuse him
confuse him with a jagged thought
for the feelings which are sought
now its dead hes still not free
his troubled state is over-powering

he grows in size and grows in though
uses against them what they have thought
he waits until the time is right
his heart is blackend with the night
now its growing near

stumble and falls
but rises to his feet
though he has been paused
his quest he will repeat

he gets another chance to go through
with what he has to do
he gets the job done
looks in at his hands he's no longer young

Never had a chance to shine
never learned the consiquences of a good time
heavy on his mind frail feelings
the sickness inside is revealing
its wicked head
only to bring death to those who refuse him
confuse him with a jagged thought
for the feelings which are sought
now its dead hes still not free
his troubled state is over-powering

he wasted his whole life
to get throught he fight
his best years are no longer here
noticing that he doesnt feel any better
he wipes a tear from his eyes
and then waits for the time he dies

Copyright © Rawjer ... [ 2003-02-05 12:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Unconstant sea so blue (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Thursday, 6th February 2003 @ 01:30:05 PM AEST
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Great poem. I loved reading it

mckayla

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