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*--Sealed With A Kiss--*
Contributed by
Lo2681
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Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 07:12:50 PM in AEST
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Your cordially invited,
To an event of two,
Who shall stand united,
He feels as though he is passer by,
Watching her life as she slowly cries,
Black tears on her wedding dress,
And the groom spills Vodka on his vest,
A roller coaster tamed by a ring,
Which to him feels like a mockery.
He watches as she sells her soul,
Does she know what she’s doing she’s not too old,
A lady in the front whispers under breath,
"I heard she slept with the best man the last time the groom left",
And every sin that has ever been between them,
The bride hopes will be absolved as she says good-bye to her freedom.
Loving the woman in white… what a sin,
But he would have given her the world if she had just let him in,
“Does anyone here object to this love?”
The priest quickly asks as the man bites his tongue,
And then the priest recites “ Two hearts shall be blessed.”
And the mother of the bride tries to smile and look at the best.
He says good-bye to bride that he wished would meet him at the alter one day,
But her crazy addiction to not letting go got in her way,
His love for her he knows he must now dismiss,
As the tragic reality for the man in the back row... is sealed with a kiss.
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Lo2681
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by yackerz85 on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:02:36 PM AEST
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I like your poem because it shows that weddings are not always perfect. Someone usually ends up getting hurt.
It was a poem straight from the heart.
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by halli on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:09:28 PM AEST
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very nice. nice wording and u can get a real good picture of whats happening in your mind. neat write!
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 9th May 2006 @ 08:30:00 PM AEST
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| I agree with all of the abve. |
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by sadaddy on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 01:43:38 AM AEST
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Lo, you can paint a picture very well with your words. Take care and be good.
sadaddy |
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by brooken_22 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 10:13:49 AM AEST
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tells a great story...i luv poems like that.....keeps you hanging to each word.
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Re: *--Sealed With A Kiss--*
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by subgenius on
Friday, 19th May 2006 @ 08:52:01 AM AEST
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Right on.
This is definetely something for me to think about. Ugh, situations like these suck. |
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